Welcome to my submission to this week’s Friday Fictioneers Challenge.
Interested in finding out more about this challenge and the group of writers that accept the challenge each week, start with our host’s, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields site by clicking the link below.
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/
Next, click the link below to read this weeks stories.
http://www.inlinkz.com/new/view.php?id=680928
Now for my 100 word story based on the photo prompt below.
PHOTO PTOMPT © Lucy Fridkin
The Secret
Becky leaned her head against the cold glass. Her stomach performed somersaults as her hometown grew in size, a sight she had not seen for five frantic years. Chasing fame and fortune in LA, Becky had traded coast when seventeen.
Soon she discovered she had not made the journey west alone. Fearing her disapproving father and stern mother, she had never once revealed her circumstance.
Her parents weren’t expecting her, and they certainly didn’t expect the little girl that sat beside her. Becky reached over and tightened her daughter’s seatbelt.
“Buckle up sweetheart, its going to be a bumpy ride.”
100 Words
Thanks for reading.
The Christmas season is upon us. I will be visiting family for the next two weeks and not able to make any posts. As such I want to take this opportunity to wish everyone a very Merry Christmas, or Happy Hanukkah and if you don’t celebrate anything this time of year take time to soak up the good will and joy this time presents.
Joy to all!
Cindy
Surprise! I hope the parents melt when they meet them both.
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You are a romantic at heart.
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Dear Cindy,
It’s my hope that her parents will welcome their prodigal daughter and granddaughter with open arms. Good set up and progression. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you. Who could possibly not melt at a grandchild’s smile.
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If the parents don’t welcome both, it’s their loss, not hers. Hopeful and sad at the same time. And Happy Holidays. 🙂
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Nice take. I think after the initial shock they’ll come around- I’m optimistic 🙂
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Thanks for dropping by again this week.
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lovely take on the prompt. Bumpy ride then smooth sailing?
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We can only hope. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Great last line, bumpy in more ways than one.
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Thanks for dropping by and for the nice comment.
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A really great story for Christmas time, loved it
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Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Nice story telling! Such a hard thing to face, but hopefully her family embraces them!
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Thanks Dawn, glad you liked the story.
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