For those of you that read my story last week, you will find that I seem to have followed a theme with this weeks tale. But it’s not as dark, I promise.
First the small print, the legalities or maybe just the niceties. Thank you Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for continuing to host this challenge to write a 100 word story based on a photo prompt. Please click her name to get all the rules and to visit her site. Thank you also to Roger Blutot for providing the photo that captured an intriguing slice of life.
Now, drum roll please. Thank you, here’s my story The Road to Freedom.
The blows rained down long after I was a bloody heap on the floor. Clinging to a thread of consciousness, I watched him don his uniform and straighten the shiny police shield that protected him and kept me captive. When the door clicked closed, I began the long journey. Inch by painful inch, I dragged my broken body to retrieve the card with only a phone number.
As my wounds healed, I was secreted from house to house across thousands of miles. I exchanged knowing looks with the women from the underground railway. My secret and theirs is safe.
Word Count: 99 carefully chosen words
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Cheers,
Cindy
A long and painful road. Powerful story.
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Thanks Iain, I appreciate your comment.
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I liked the idea of bringing the Underground Railroad into the present day
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Thanks Neil. There are real life Underground Railroads working in the US for abused women and children.
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Awful but so well told. Glad she got away.
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Thanks Laurie.
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Almost painful to read. Very well written.
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It is a difficult subject. I hope I walked the line. Thank you for the nice compliment.
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I agree with Laurie. Yes, this is a track some women have to travel if they want to reach freedom someday. Do I have it right: the abusive partner was a cop?
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Yes. I wanted to explore the question who do you turn to if you can’t trust the police.
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Here I go, up on my soapbox! I can’t imagine why ANYONE thinks it’s o.k. to beat, torture, imprison people or animals weaker than they are, or kinder than they are or…. stepping down,
Well done. You can see that your story had an impact on me. Thank you.
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I agree with you 100% and with little provocation will join you on hour soap box. I’m glad the story was impactful.
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Thank goodness there was a way out for her. I bet there’d be no point reporting him to his mates down at the police station.
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You got that right.
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That is an introspective piece. No easy (or even difficult) answers to that one.
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Thanks for dropping by. Glad the story was thought provoking.
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Harrowing tale, glad she managed to get away. Well told
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Thanks Michael.
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Here’s hoping he never finds her. Very realistic and good writing, Cindy. —- Suzanne
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Thanks for the compliment, glad you found the story realistic. In my mine she is living happily every after.
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I so much hope that it’s gonna be redemption too… even if protected by a badge.
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Thanks Bjorn.
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Dear Cindy,
I’m appalled that the policeman beat her like that. Hope her road really does lead to freedom. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. I think this was a hard story to read but I hope it had a uplifting ending.
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The ones in uniform too often get away with horrid crimes. Thankfully she managed to get her hands on the special card to freedom… Well done Cindy. I just want to pistol-whip him myself.
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Thanks Dale. If I wasn’t such I pacifist I would pistol-whip him too.
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