Wow, the picture for this weeks challenge inspired so many stories, most involving someone sheepishly admitting their ineptitude in driving. I nudged those aside for something darker. I hope you enjoy it.
But first a big thank you once again to our host, check out her site at Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, for the rules regarding this challenge. This week Rochelle contributed the photo prompt, although it’s unclear if she was responsible for the damage.
Years ago, the jealousy and anger that had raged like summer storms destroyed our marriage. Its death was a bitter beginning not an end. Stunned at the continued onslaught, I followed the rules. What else could I do? I called the police when she slipped into my house, leaving in her wake a trail of destruction. I could paper my walls with restraining orders. Things I could replace, my shattered nerves would eventually calm. But she had to be stopped before she discovered the precious new life my girlfriend was harboring.
Unlike MacBeth, I was able to wash the blood from my hands.
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Cindy
Ooohhh… I think he has a serious case. She sounds like a nutjob
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Thanks Dale, glad you like the story.
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He has crossed a line, now he is as bad as his first wife.
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Thanks Michael, you have an interesting perspective. He definitely crossed a line.
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The first murder is hard, but what about those that follow?
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Ha, you are warped. I think he’s a nice guy and there will be no more.
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It took you long enough to figure me out 😀
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Yup, definitely darker, but deftly handled
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Thank for the complement Neil.
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Excellent story. Hope he can live with himself for the sake of his newborn child.
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Thanks Iain, this may be another bitter beginning. Glad you liked the story.
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I have a feeling she’ll haunt him in death. As you said, just another bitter beginning.
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Thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment.
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You tackled a real issue there. Loved it.
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Thank you so much. Really happy it was effective and that you liked it.
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Yes! “Enjoy” it I did. That last line ….. Oh so well done.
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Thank you so much Alicia.
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Dark indeed. But it had to be done… 🙂
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Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.
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Dear Cindy,
When you said you went dark, you weren’t kidding. 😉 Kudos for not following the photo to the letter. Well written.
In answer to the question in your intro, the accident was not my fault. I was broadsided last spring by an SUV driver intent on passing me on a single lane exit ramp. He took out my entire driver’s side. The owner’s insurance paid for all of the repairs. Might as well get some mileage out of the photos, right?
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, thanks for the kind comment on my story. Sorry to hear that the poor damaged car was yours. Any accident is startling to say the least. Glad to hear everything worked out.
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Morally it’s wrong to murder but he has a reasoned case, he has to protect the unborn. I sympathise with him, does that make me wrong/evil? 🙂
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Wrong yes, evil I don’t think so. Glad you found the story thought provoking.
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Yes, and on the plus side you will have a new porch that could mask the grave… with plenty of room for the next one, and the next…
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My what a dark mind you have Mr. Rudberg. 🙂
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One shouldn’t condone murder, but I knid of sympathise.
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Thanks for dropping by Liz. I agree with you murder is wrong. I guess there is such a thing as doing the wrong thing for the right reason, but it’s still wrong.
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He may feel justified but a murder is hard to cover up with today’s forensics. He has really stepped into new territory. The law probably won’t be on his side. Good writing, Cindy. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks Suzanne, glad you liked it and that it was thought provoking.
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