Here we are, the last challenge for March. Yes, April is just a few days away. For those of you living in northern climes, spring is here and summer is on it’s way. I miss spring almost as much as I miss snow. I long for the first sighting of tulips as they push out of the ground promising a riot of color.
Enough longing for the past. Here’s to the future. Let’s start with a visit to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, at her site for all the rules for this challenge. Stop by, read her story and leave a comment. Take a chance and join our group by submitting your story.
Click this link to real all the stories based on this week’s photo.
BTW the photo is courtesy of Fatima Fakier Deria, who retains all rights to her photo.
And now my 100 word story – Betrayed
The blazing sun shot daggers into my eyes as I scanned the horizon. A hopeless gesture. Day 18 since my young husband left for a daytrip on his sailboat, a gift from me for his 30th birthday. I had been amused when he named it. No news, no sightings since the life preserver emblazoned with Molly’s Folly was found on day four. Still, I wait. I watch.
Day 61 a withdrawal from the bank account I discovered on Day 10. A breadcrumb trail to follow.
I wait. It will take years. Can you be convicted of killing someone already dead?
Thanks for taking the time to read. Please leave me a comment, good or bad.
Cindy
Whoa, that ending and question! Way to leave it on a cliffhanger.
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Thanks, glad you liked it.
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It sounds as if Birthday Boy had other plans. Perhaps a girl in another port? You know how those sailors can be. “I yam what I yam.”
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You’re so right. But Molly has some plans of her own.
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You built the drama and the tension very well, and then added a twist of revenge. Well done
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Thanks Neil, glad you liked it.
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Not a very grateful way to say thanks for the present, no wonder she wants revenge.
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Thanks Iain for reading and commenting.
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One really feels for this lass, I hope she meets a better guy. Great story writing.
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Michael, thanks for the kind compliment. Glad you liked the story.
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What a nasty chap. That’s the best thing about killing someone who’s been declared dead – no-one will miss them! So I hear 😉
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I agree!
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Dear Cindy,
I don’t think a certain rat is going to see his next birthday.But then if he’s “already dead”…;) Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle.
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Very cleverly crafted. Great write.
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Thank you!
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Oh! I love her patience… she will get hers, of that I am sure…
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Thanks Dale, glad you stopped by.
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Hah, I love the ending. Molly’s Folly, what a name for a boat for the young husband. I wonder who named it.
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Thanks, glad you liked the story. I think the husband was her true folly. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
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Oh! Love the twists and turns in this tale. Well done.
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Thanks so much for you kind comment.
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I love this plot twist. This needs to be a book.
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Thank you so much for your kind comment. There is a lot more to be said in this story.
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I think she will keep a cold dish waiting…
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Yes, you’re right. Thanks for reading and comment.
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I love the twist at the end. That last line nailed it!
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Thank so much, glad you liked it.
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