It’s that time again. The challenge – write a story based on the photo prompt in 100 words or less. Challenge, accepted!
Hats off once again to our host Rochelle Wisoff for posting this week’s challenge and for continuing to read and comment on all the stories.
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Here is week’s prompt –
The drums of war shattered the peace in their village. A devastated Solange clutched her husband Remy before he and thirty-nine others rode north slowly receding from sight.
Time marched on. Seasons changed. Day and night a determined Solange labored while her hands bled, crafting the tiles in the color of her husband’s coat of arms. Solange’s turret became a beacon seen for miles.
Her task completed, Solange relentlessly scanned the horizon.
In the fifth year, a rag-tag group of men approached from the north. Her heart lurched as she slowly counted. One, two…
…nineteen.
99 words
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Nicely done, a good take. I hope Remy was among the nineteen.
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Very well done… and you left us hanging! Great job.
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Thank you so much!
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Dear Cindy,
I definitely felt the tension Solange must’ve felt as she counted. I hope Remy was among them. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle.
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Nice, and we’re forever wondering – was he one of those who returned?
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Thanks
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I really liked what you have done with this prompt. Mike
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Thank you!
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I hope Remy was one of the nineteen – good that you left that question unanswered!
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Thank you. In my mind sometimes he is and sometimes he’s not.
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I like the way the story truly reflects the prompt. The heartache of waiting 5 years, seems unbearable, and your ending leaves us hoping, like Solange.
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Thanks for reading and I like Solange refuse to give up hope.
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Solange’s hope and determination shines like her roof. Whether Remy is among the ones to return or not–twenty of them are lost and there will be many broken hearts in the village. Great story.
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Thank you.
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I like the way you’ve left this. Was Remy one of the 19. 19 out of 39, you’ve chosen the numbers well, the odds are pretty even, we can hope he’s made it.
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Thank you.
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Oh I so much hope that Remy was part of the 19… but on the other hand, there will be other crying anyway… I hate wars.
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If only everyone felt the same about war.
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That was certainly a cliff-hanger, Cindy. Good take on the prompt and good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you Suzanne.
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